Notice how every comment has a purpose: clarifying and deepening her response to the prompt. Lights out work, Kate from period 1.
Thursday, February 16, 2012
Thursday, January 26, 2012
Nicely Done, 2nd Period Ninja
Lots of things to like in the below introduction and its 3 parts (hook, pivot, thesis). The anecdotal lead to the below introduction is just lights out good. It includes the essence of good story element (character, plot, mood, setting, rise/fall, theme, etc.). The hook transitions to the thesis while establishing the position of the writer. The thesis is much more than a topic. Nicely done, Luke, period 2, Mr. Mauel, 2012!
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